I wrote the lyrics and melody for Come Home To Me, but did not record my own version of the song. Instead I paid Douglas Haines to record a version of it for me.

Song Title: Come Home To Me


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Come Home To Me


You watch the horses run
And dance into the wind
Our spirit starts to grow
The day that life begins

New hope at every corner
New fantasies to chase
Search under stars and skies
Until you find your place

(Chorus)
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When this world gets dark
And you are lost at sea
When it all falls down
With no one else around
Will you come home to me

Will you come home to me
Will you come home to me
When love's broken chains
No longer set you free
Will you come home to me

(Second Verse)
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An empty pillow waits
I reach but you're not there
Blinded by raining sand
From castles in the air

But if the ghosts of time
come knocking at your door
know the fire in my heart
will burn forever more

(Chorus)
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When this world gets dark
And you are lost at sea
When it all falls down
With no one else around
Will you come home to me

Will you come home to me
Will you come home to me
When love's broken chains
No longer set you free
Will you come home to me

(Fade Out)
Will you come home to me
Will you come home to me
Will you come home to me
Will you come home to me
Will you come home to me

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Reviews of Come Home To Me on ReverbNation.com (overall song: 6.9 out of 10):
  • This man has a gorgeously husky voice, and that immediately boosts the song to sounding great. The strumming acoustic guitar however, is slightly generic and repetitive and some cool electric reverb guitar riffs would really add to the piece. The melody is sweet and would work well within a pop song, however as a ballad I think the song needs more than just a guitar.
  • The record sounds like a country song and the acoustic guitar is very well calculated. The man singing has a low but steady tenor voice. The song is a country song I'm guessing and the song is very well made. The lyrics are sappy though and I think this should change. Overall this is a good song to put on the charts.
  • I love the way it starts off with the acoustic guitar and then he starts signing and it only gets better. I love this man's talent. The lyrics are so sweet and meaningful. I love how calm it makes you feel. The tempo is just right and melody is so soft and sweet. I'm really digging this song. Sounds very peaceful.
  • Great guitar to start it out. i like how it sounds with his voice. his voice is a little plain but i do like the feel of the song, the lyrics are a little predictable but overall the song has a good feel it's a song I would have in my iPod. it's a western trucker kind of song. I would listen again.
  • Nice piano play in the beginning and the artist coming straight for the singing, I really like how he did that and would definitely keep playing this song again. The melody and the beat, one goes quicker than the other and I think that can be improved, the song gves me a chill and a sad feeling just because of the lyrics and all.
  • Though the singer has a great voice, this song would sound better as a non-acoustic version. It has everything to be radio worthy; good lyrics, a good singer, it overall flows very easy. It just needs a non-acoustic version to make it more memorable.
  • Here we have a tempo and softer rhythm that is professional and not overly exciting. I find this singer to have a wonderful set of chords that have warmth and understanding in them. His singing seems like a big part of his personality. Unique and one of a kind style, this artist is getting his song on with the best chords ever possible these days. His variations are totally better than ever, they have plenty of his old singing tone in them but with a slightly perkier personality.
  • Smooth guitar opening. Nice rhythmic guitar. The vocals aren't as strong as the guitar. Good vocal inflections however. Some nice little noodling done by the guitar player along the way. The vocals are a bit off key at times. The harmonies help a lot when the background vocals come in. This song is absolutely beautiful. Perhaps some voice lessons?? Right now you could carry a bar open mic night and be one of the top guys. Your voice would carry any further without some help. This is an awesome song though.
  • The song opens with a very uplifting guitar melody, and is shortly followed by some very nice, clean vocals. Your voice is very strong and robust, giving the track a very prominent effect. I am underwhelmed by the melodies, as they are not catchy enough to make this song very popular. The lyrics on the other hand are very well written. Good work.
  • The introduction to this tune grabbed my attention from the beginning. This song has an acoustic feel to it which I automatically warmed to. I think the artist of this song is very talented and the vocalist certainly has the ability to become sucessful. The lyrics are average and there is nothing that currently makes them stand out which I think is what this song is currently missing.
  • The ending of this song was very smooth. I like how it started getting quieter and quieter, very nice. I also like the transitions in this song, they are really smooth and have no problem while transitioning. I love the vocals, what a beautiful and angelic voice he has, awesome. This was actually such an excellent piece, this will become popular.
  • Fun rock n' roll guitar. The vocals sound country but I didn't like the rest of the song. It was repetitive and it didn't appeal to anything I care about. I can maybe listen to this song if I was in a car and it was on the radio but other than that it didn't make me feel anything and I hate soung that are like this.
  • I think that this song is cheerful and really has a lot of different guitars added to it, I don't like the singers pitch throughout this song, I don't like the singer is very great and has a lot of power in their voice. It's a very truthful beat that sounds positive, great melody that caries onward in the song.
  • Great singing, goes extremely nicely with the acoustic guitar playing. The lyrics are very wholesome, they simply make you feel happy and at-ease. I really can't get over how nice the singer's voice is, it makes me feel so comfortable, and almost safe. You can especially hear the falsetto he does later on in the song, and it is absolutely superb.
  • At the start the song has a lot of changes in volume much like that of a Bon Jovi song. I thought the singer did a nice job staying in a middle vocal range still maintaining power. I enjoyed the reflective lyrics that defined the song. This song had a warm and light feel to it. Toward the end another soulful singer is added and this makes the work more radiant.
  • This track starts off very simply with the acoustic guitar. The vocals could be sharper, that very faint echo is not needed and seems a little sloppy. The performance seems a little afraid and more confidence would make all the difference here. The harmony line is nicely done. There is a lack of energy here however.
  • Nice acoustic guitar in the prelude is peaceful and quiet sounding. The singer comes in and I enjoy the tone and timbre. Upbeat, but yet somehow searching with subtle yearning. The band is awesome and the guitarist never misses a beat. I love the lyrics; it tells a good story that I can relate to. Definite commercial possibilities.
  • This song has a nice guitar sound. I like the voice of the main singer which is very unique and beautiful I like the lyrics of this song and I think many people can relate to it. This song makes me want to throw myself on the ground and watch the clouds pass by. This is a nice song.
  • The guitar intro induces the fact that the song has an emotional background to it. I can't really make out what the song is about from the start but my best guess is about getting your loved one back. The chorus is catchy because of the change in rhythm for that part.
  • The guitar in this song is very catchy and good. I hate country music. This is a very typical country song. They all song the same. The song is trash. I do not like it. The song is not my type of music. It is a three out of ten.
  • Good tone on the guitar part and a nice chord progression. The vocals are strong and clean and I found them enjoyable to listen too. Loved the choice of lyrics and the added harmonies in the back up vocals were a nice addition. It has a really strong melody line and I enjoyed the simplicity of it because it was still interesting and fun to listen to, whilst beening relaxing and mellow. Great job.
  • This is such a good song and performance. The melody is calm and relaxing, the singer has an attractive vocal tone and I can hear that he puts true feelings into singing the lyrics. I love the acoustic, guitar song and it is easy to hear the singer which is great - nothing overlaps his voice. The performance quality is very high in terms of instrument and the singing. I think it has commercial potential as the lyrics are unique and the song is distinctive in overall.
  • This song has very mainstream components. The accompaniment is not too busy and the vocals and harmonization are raspy and interesting. The songwriting is pretty standard but the guitar is offbeat enough to make it worth a listen. There is a nice melody which is relaxed and at the same time not boring. It's upbeat when it needs to be and calm as necessary.

Below is a version of Come Home To Me, by dyingseed:

Reviews of Dyingseed's version of Come Home To Me on ReverbNation.com (overall song: 6.2 out of 10):
  • Amazing guitar work, but the vocals take away from this track. Work on vocal range a little bit, not too many highs or lows. Great mix, sounds really warm and danceable. Lyrics are a little generic, but not too bad. Thought inspiring harmonies, I really dig what you're trying to do here. Great approach to freestyle jazz.
  • I like the artist's voice in this song. It also sounds like he is far away but not at the same time. I like that effect. The instrumental consists of an acoustic guitar and I am so sure that this song would sound amazing if this artist did it live. I think with a more full instrumental this song could go very far on the radio. Of course the artist would need to perfect his vocals as well. The quality would have to be mastered too.
  • This is an okay original track. love this acoustic song. The artist has awesome vocals. He can really sing. He has a great original sounding voice. He has a bright future as an recording artist. Everyone should check out this artist. Nice work. The chorus sound wonderful here. His tone is equally beautiful.
  • This male singer has so much passion for this genre of music. I can hear it in his voice. I am literally impressed too. For a male, his voice is just down right flawless. The instrumental sounds fast paced and the instruments are played fast paced aswell. The lyrics are graphic and kinda sad. I would defiantly recommend this song to people because absolutely anyone can relate to its lyrics.
  • This track just jumps right in, the vocalist is talented and has a passionate voice. The lyrics are moving and relatable. They send a very interesting and engaging message. The guitar playing is just as passionate as the vocals. I have to state again that I love the message of this song.
  • So I feel like this song was very sentimental to the singer. I think that time was taken into consideration when this song was made.The vocals could be heard fine, and clear for the most part. The music was complimenting to the lyrics and the base behind the track off this album. if they could just make more songs that sound like this one the world would be in peace.
  • The guitar sounds are very pleasing. I am not a fan of the singer though. His vocals are weak and expressionless. I do not see this song being played on the radio. It definitely wouldn't be a top ten song. The song reminds me of a guy who is trying to rebuild his relationship. The lyrics try to have heart but sound too cliche.
  • This song was not very good. I did not like this song. The beat was not very good and was not pleasing to listen too. The singing itself needs improvement and was not consistent throughout the song. The lyrics were repetitive and were hard to understand at parts. I give this a 3 because it needs much improvement to make it anywhere close to be on the radio.
  • Again im not a fan of contry song and i dont like this song because of how repitive he is. The melody is great but the singer is to off key on must of the parts when the song goes fast he goes slow and so on. So i won't be hearing this song anytime soon.
  • Nice guitar work that's catchy and has some thought and talent put into it. good lyrics especially at the chorus. if this guys voice was recorded in a studio i think it would sound a lot fuller and add a lot more depth. he has a pretty good voice as well which is always a good thing. i think adding a light bass riff and drum track on this it would add alot more to the song and a better outro would of been better as well but this guy has some talent.
  • The intro of this song is very catchy and pleasing to the ears. I really enjoy the melody and the acoustic background. The instruments and the singer's voice mesh really well together. The lyrics are really sweet and romantic. I could hear this song being played anywhere with a nice soothing setting. Overall i really enjoyed this song and wouldn't nind hearing it on the radio or on tv. Definitely something i'd listen to again and not skip. However the only thing i'd change is the repetetivness in the words. The vocals are spot on.
  • You have beautiful vocals! The instrumental or guitar you are using reflects off your voice like magic! This is so perfect that I am running out of words. Your lyrics are touching and I wouldn't change a thing! Good luck in the future and your will be great one day!
  • Not my type of music!! The lyrics are emotional, and have lots of meaning and I like that, I have to admit. The vocalist sings a range of notes, too. It's actually not a bad song, if you like music in this genre. NO autotune seems to be noticeable to me, either. Which of course is amazing. But lyrics at the end are very repetitive. That's a no no.
  • The fast pace, little intro is a change from its genre and is a stand out comparing it to other bands/artists. The soulful lyrics are a beautiful with the well written guitar piece to contemplate fast pace song. the chorus is beautifully written with his shaky voice, it is defiantly beautiful and the artist will have a bright future if more people listen to.
  • This singer should not quit his day job. the vocals are weak and plain. the melody is safe and not compelling. the lyrics are cheesy. this song is not that good and i would not spend time downloading it. this song should not be released because it would not be on the Billboard 100.
  • No! No! The artist really needs to focus on his singing skills. Starting with his vocal ranges; he sings the high notes at the wrong times and the low notes at the wrong times as well. Next, his voice is very inconsistent and crackly at times to. Now, the lyrics were the best part of the song. They described a valid storyline and I thought that was pretty decent.
  • The singing sounded very out of tune from the start. I didn't like the artists voice, it was all over the place, artist needs more pitch control, and singing practice. The instrumentals didn't even blend well with the vocals, it was very strained and forced, felt unnatural and more like a karaoke performance. I disliked the song, it was hard to get into and rushed.
  • The first thing I immediately noticed about this record was that the recording quality was not up to par. It did sound like it was recorded live. There was just a guitar playing which sounded just okay to me. The singer's voice was fine. I did notice that he did have some issues staying on pitch. But for the most part I think his voice did sound pretty solid. The lyrics were ok, they really did not do much to captivate my attention. Overall I think this was ok, just a little boring.
  • This is a really good song. I like his voice and the guitar is in good tune. It all fits together. It's really good. It has a good meaning and mesage. And its a classic love song I think it's really good and I would download this to my phone and I'm sure my friends would like it too.